De You knew my heart had wings
but no feet to step on the rock in your heart.
Thirsty for you, I flew to the river.
I couldn’t land but tripped on a pebble I swallowed
and now the egg of our love I contain.
©Daniela Marin, 2018
My poem for the dVerse Poets Pub Quadrille – Egg
Worlds of Words 
A delicate Quadrille with an unexpected ending!
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Thank you, Kim! It’s my first time here… I’m excited, of course, that’s why I can’t seem to find my words!
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Welcome to the pub, Daniela! We have another prompt on Tuesday, this week with Lillian, and Frank will be hosting Meeting the Bar on Thursday.
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Thank you! will try to be present.
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Wow, it is a quadrille, isn’t it, I was confused at first. Thanks for bringing me into the dance.
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You’re welcome! :) I didn’t know what a qaudrille was until a few days ago when I’ve discovered this magic site!
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Very descriptive way to impregnate the heart.
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What a way to get pregnant! Lol! (Just kidding.)
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For a heart, anything can be possible, isn’t it? Thanks! :)
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Oh yes!
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Such a wonderfully sweet and tender write!
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Thank you!
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Pregnant heart – that is is quite unexpected ~ Welcome to dVerse ~
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Thank you, Grace!
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Unique, young lady. And now that I get it, very wonderful.
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… blushing…
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A poignant pregnancy, of heart and body!
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Very nice take on the prompt. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you!
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S wonderful poem with much heart. Welcome to dVerse!.
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Thank you!
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Lovely write with a twist :)
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Thanks, Neeraj!
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Welcome to dVerse, Daniela! Hope to see you here often. I’ll be tending the pub this afternoon for our Tuesday Poetics. Prompt will post at 3 PM Boston time.
As for this take on the prompt….truly lovely to read. I only hope his heart is not of rock, now that she carries the egg of their love :) Well done!
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Thank you, Lillian! I’ve been looking for such a place, truly needed it! Thank you for your warm welcome. Felt its soft waves. Music is in my veins too.
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Love to see a new face at the bar… and really love how you used that title and followed through all the way to the end
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Thank you!
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Welcome to d’verse, Danielle! This was a very unique response to the prompt. Hope to see you again. ☺
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Thank you, Mish! I hope too! :)
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