An exercise of the opposites

(Though it’s already Sunday 🙂 )

Our words this week are:

– guest and host

– liquid and solid

And my exercise is:

My liquid dreams poured on your solid ground.

Soft tears kept falling on your hard polished heart

until tiny pores opened the giant door of your mind,

the host of the uninvited guest inside the closed house of your heart.

picaturi ploaie

Published by Daniela Marin

weejars says:

April 1, 2018 at 11:28 AM

Beautiful! Well done

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1. Daniela Marin says:
  
  April 1, 2018 at 11:29 AM
  
  Thank you so much!
  
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Michael says:

April 1, 2018 at 10:50 PM

I liked this one very much, powerfully written.

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1. Daniela Marin says:
  
  April 2, 2018 at 8:47 AM
  
  Thank you, Michael!
  
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